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Re: chapter 1: Wrong place, wrong time
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! You got something going here, kiddo! :idea: A nice government thriller, sounds like. Of course, i am a sucker for action/adventure fiction of any kind, so ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: A conversation with my friend
This is very good, Tyler! You present two important issues that seem to interest the world today: the presidential race (Obama vs. McCain) and the origin of the world (evolution ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: On Salvation's Wings
OMG. YWS has discovered a new talent! Your work is extemely interesting. I wish you hadn't stopped so soon! Is your story set during the Salem Witch Trials? It sounds ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Do You Mind?
A very pretty poem, sad and wistful. :cry: However, I would like to know what you mean by "do you mind if I stay?" Is the poem about a boyfriend ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: The Mask Maker [3]
Wow this is a good story you got going here. A little hard to understand at times but on the whole very cool and suspenseful. :D
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Escape from the Academy, Part 1
Anya fidgeted anxiously in her seat as the Headmistress climbed up the steps to the podium. She secretly thought she had never seen an uglier woman. She was fat and ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Anya's First Encounter with Jet
Anya looked curiously at Jet Steelsheen as he walked in, wondering what kind of person he was. It was common knowledge among the students at the Academy that he was ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: To the Sea
Ship-breaker, rain-waker Gray-green goddess, dark and light Life-taker, music-maker Kiss by day and kill by night. Passion, anger, love and fire Liquid temptress clad in blue An object of terror ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: The Warrior Princess
Thx 4 reading my poem ppl. Wolf said it's too cliched. That may be so, but sometimes cliches truly are the best way of saying things. BTW, Wolf, I find ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: The Warrior Princess
I have lived on this green earth Only fourteen years And yet Fate has already placed Her mark on me. I am young, yet I am no child. I am ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: The Shallow King (A Set of Fantasy Quatrain)
Hey, this poem is actually pretty good. And the rhymes don't sound contrived, either. Keep up the good work! P.S. Glad you liked my play! :)
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: A Really Random and Retarded Play
I know this play is VERY random and VERY retarded and VERY short but I'm experiencing both writer's and actress's block right now and it was the best I could ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Sunken Sky or Pool of Clouds
I hope you guys (and girls!) like this poem. U C, this morning I was standing in my back yard looking down into my pool. The water was perfectly still, ...
Dec 18, 2007 -
Re: Sunken Sky or Pool of Clouds
I stand On the edge of the pool Looking down into the sky. The water is the only thing between me And the atmosphere within the earth. I jump in ...
Dec 18, 2007
